Shloss v. Sweeney et al

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Declaration of David Olson in Support of 32 Memorandum in Opposition, filed byCarol Loeb Shloss. (Attachments: # 1 Exhibit A (Part 1)# 2 Exhibit A (Part 2)# 3 Exhibit A (Part 3)# 4 Exhibit A (Part 4)# 5 Exhibit B (Part 1)# 6 Exhibit B (Part 2)# 7 Exhibit B (Part 3)# 8 Exhibit B (Part 4)# 9 Exhibit B (Part 5)# 10 Exhibit B (Part 6)# 11 Exhibit B (Part 7)# 12 Exhibit C)(Related document(s) 32 ) (Falzone, Anthony) (Filed on 12/15/2006)

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1. "Remembering your shapes and sizes on the pillow of your babycurls." 2. Dormiva durante il giomo/Dormiva durante la notte

3. "Giorgio...spends his day pulling about papers cltohes and shoes. He is cursed frequently by both his parents formislaying the comb and thesponge or the towel or my hate or shoes: and when asked where it is hepoints to the ceiling or the window and says 'la!'" 4. "Is there any fear of Georgie being rivaled at present?" she asked. "I hope not. That would be the climax."

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5. "I am simply waiting for a little financial change which will enable me to change my life. At the latest it will come at the end of two years but even if it does not come Ishall do the best I can. I have hesitated before telling you that I imagine the present relations between Nora and myself are about to suffer some alteration."

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6.

"Are you annoyed?"he asked.

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7. "[r]emember there are three people now. And I suppose it will be worse when there are four." 8. "As for Nora and Georgie it seems to me easy to exaggerate. I suppose it will hardly come to starvation point."

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9. "We met and joined our bodies and souls freely and nobly and our children are the fruit of our bodies. Good night, my dearest girl, my little Galway bride, my tender love from Ireland."53

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10. "[T]ell that comical daughter of mine that I would send her a doll."

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11. C'era una volta, una bella bambina Che si chiamava Lucia Dormiva durante il giorno Dormiva durante la notte Perché non sapeva camminare Perché non sapeva camminare Dormiva durante il giorno Dormiva durante la notte Once upon a time there was a beautiful little girl Who was named Lucia She slept all day She slept all night Because she didn't know how to walk Because she didn't know how to walk She slept all day She slept all night. 70 12. "[S]he sang that song; that was [her] song.

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13. "At two years old he sang operatic arias to the delight of the music loving Italians. The proprietor of the cafe would gladly give the young couple a free meal for this treat. Lucia a quiet, chubby little blue eyed baby toddles after her big brother... Giorgio was soon left to take care of her while his mother and father went out carousing at night."

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Frail the white rose and frail are Her hands that gave Whose soul is sere and paler Than time's wan wave. Rosefrail and fair -- yet frailest A wonder wild In gentle eyes thou veilest, My blueveined child.

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Of cool sweet dew and radiance mild The moon a web of silence weaves In the still garden where a child Gathers the simple salad leaves. A moondew stars her hanging hair And Moonlight kisses her young brow And, gathering, she sings an air: Fair as the wave is, fair, art thou! Be mine, I pray, a waxen ear To shield me from her childish croon And mine a shielded heart for her Who gathers simples of the moon.116

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16. "Though they're all but merely a schoolgirl yet these way went they." (FW 226.33-34)

17. At first I was surprised that my father had made a name for himself but then I got sort of used to the idea.

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"Those first girly stirs."

19. "I scarely know him [Vail] though I think they met him or her somewhere.

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