Warner Bros. Entertainment Inc. et al v. RDR Books et al

Filing 52

DECLARATION of Steven Jan Vander Ark in Opposition re: 22 MOTION for Preliminary Injunction.. Document filed by RDR Books. (Attachments: # 1 Exhibit 1, # 2 Exhibit 2, # 3 Exhibit 3, # 4 Exhibit 4, # 5 Exhibit 5, # 6 Exhibit 6, # 7 Exhibit 7, # 8 Exhibit 8, # 9 Exhibit 9, # 10 Exhibit 10, # 11 Exhibit 11, # 12 Exhibit 12, # 13 Exhibit 13, # 14 Exhibit 14)(Ahrens, Julie)

Warner Bros. Entertainment Inc. et al v. RDR Books et al

Doc. 52 Att. 12

EXHIBIT 12

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Lovegood, Luna next to last paragraph studying new species of cratures creatures misspelled ----Lovegood, Xenophilius 3rd paragraph wearing on his egg-yolk-colored cloak change the word "on" to 'with' (it was on a chain around his neck, not on his cloak) ----Macdonald, Magnus "Dent-Head" remove URL ----MacFarlan, Hamis remove URL ----Madam Primpernelle's (DP2) ----Maddock, Alasdair remove URL (DP1,2,3) ----Magical Equipment Control (DP1) ----Maidenhead (DP4) ----Malfoy, Lucius 7th paragraph Death Eaters who had earned the Dark Lord's wrath, cause the Lucius and cause should be caused remove the word "the" before Lucius -----

Mandrake (Mandragora) A plant used to make Mandrake Restorative Draught, a powerful restorative returns people insert the word "that" (or 'which') before the word 'returns' ----Marchbanks, Madam Griselda remove URL (OP31) and elder of the Wizengamot capitalize Elder ----Masking Fog (DP2) ----McBride, Dougal (DP3) ----McCormack, Catriona remove URL ----McCormack, Kirley using (QA7). remove the word "using" ----McCormack, Meghan remove URL ----McLaggen, Cormac remove URL ----McLeod, Cormack (DP2,3) ----Medical magic witch doctors (DP), change to witch-doctors (DP1) -----

"Merlin's Beard!" An exclamation of surprise, referencing to the famous change "surprise, referencing" to "surprise; a reference" There are number There are a number ----Merpeople 5th line have greyish skin change greyish to grayish 2nd paragraph The houses often have gardens of week change "week" to 'weed' (canon says weed, but perhaps 'seaweed' would sound better?) ----Mersey River (DP2) ----Ministry Cars (PA5, HBP6). - should not be italic ----Mistletoe last line managed to put his Nargle change the word "put" to 'set' (put is used again in the sentence and its confusing) ----Mnemosyne Clinic for Memory Modification (DP4) ----Moaning Myrtle 2nd line She was been hiding remove the word "been" 4th line it was a boy, so remove the word "so" (doesn't work with the word 'realizing')

last line, 2nd paragraph Ron seems particularly adept change word "particularly" to 'especially' (particular is repetitious) 3rd paragraph (CS17) and spying on him when as he bathed remove either the word "when" or "as" 3rd paragraph More recently been meeting Draco Malfoy, too, in the boys' bathroom. revise sentence, sounds odd ----Mobiliarbus last line add "Christmas" to tree ----Moonshine, Regulus (DP4) ----Mordaunt, Ethelbard (DP1) ----Morgan, Valmai (DP3,4) ----Mostafa, Hassan remove URL ----motorcycle, flying to accomodate its rider (PS1)). Later accommodate misspelled, remove extra parenthesis ----Mrs. Scower's Magical Mess Remover Skower's misspelled ----Muggle-born Registration Commission Umbridge misspelled (with 2 r's)

----Muggle guard (DP2) ----Muggle-Worthy Excuse Committee Acccidents misspelled ----Mysteries, Department of 2nd paragraph, last line Though nobody knows what is is, should say "it is" ----Noble Sport of Warlocks, The seventeeth is misspelled ----Nogtail foolhardy way rid the farm change to "foolproof way to" ----Norwegian Ridgeback 2nd line The horns of a Ridgenback Ridgeback misspelled ----Number twelve, Grimmauld Place after they died in 1981, the change 1981 - should be 1985 ----Nundu nundu's breath Nundu's should be capitalized ----Occamy Occamy should be capitalized (twice in the entry) ----Oddpick, Winkus (DP3)

----Orchideous boquet is misspelled ----Ordinary Wizarding Levels (O.W.L.s) potential career choices (DP). (DP2) ----orphanage last paragraph Harry, Ron, and Hermione visited the orphange briefly orphanage misspelled ----owls 4th line are locked into number four, Privet Drive change "locked into" to 'locked up in' ----Paddington Station a booth a MacDonalds... a booth "at" ----paper airplanes because of the mess the birds cost flying change the word "cost" to 'caused' actually, I'd change the wording of this whole line to say something more humorous like: "because paper airplanes don't leave droppings." ----Peasegood, Arnold (DP3) ----Penrose, Professor Phoebus (DP1) ----Pettigrew, Peter "Wormtail" 2nd paragraph, last line

destroying Sirius' life as well as he was sent to Azkaban destroying Sirius' life and landing him in Azkaban 3rd paragraph, second line living as Percy living as Percy's ----Philpott, Arkie Probity Probe at after remove the word "at" ----Pinkstone, Carlotta revealing the wizaring world wizarding is misspelled ----Pips, Dagbert (DP4) ----Plumpton Pass when Roderick Plumpton's did Plumpton (remove the apostrophe s) ----Pogrebin 3rd line pogrebin attempts to devour them. capitalize Pogrebin ----Poke, Royden (DP3) ----Pomfrey, Madam Poppy 1st paragraph, seventh line "SNEAK" tattooed on Marietta Edgecombe's forehead. change the word "forehead" to 'face'. (it was NOT her forehead- but her nose and cheeks) ----prefects 3rd line Ron and Hemrione were the Gryffindor

Hermione misspelled ----Primpernelle, Madam (DP2) ----Prod, Demetrius J. (DP2) ----Prod, Elsie (DP2) ----Prophecy 1st line effect where a Seer give information change "give" to 'gives' ----Puddlemere United (DP2) ----Pumpkins R Us (DP4) ----Quigley, Finbar (DP1,2) -----